The rough draft for "The Race", book 1 of the experimental novel series, "The Offworld Chronicles", completed and looking for some proof readers.  I need a total of 10 people who are interested in reading the rough draft as it stands now and willing to provide me feedback on the story.  This is things such as what you liked/hated about the story, concerns, questions, plot holes, etc.

Obviously this is a rough draft, so there will still be a number of issues within the story, but the core of the story is essentially complete as it stands, and won't change a lot, and that's the primary area of interest I'm trying to get feedback on.  IE, plot, characters, themes, etc.

So if you'd be interested in being a reader on this new story and willing to provide feedback, I'd be happy to have you.  Just contact me and I'll send you a copy of the rough draft to look at.